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Life of Nothing
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Life of Nothing |
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Wet Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 60Brentwood, Tn |
My mind exploading with the troubles of life. So many problems I can't handle. My life means nothing, Other than to make other people happy, and mad. Soon I will know the point to my understanding. I will have plenty of what I have been craving for, Ever since I have started to think like you. The society of man, I have started to die like you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Can't let this slip by...there's only one thing harder than losing sight of yourself--and that is to catch sight of yourself later...incredible...touched me much (ooooh!) keep up the good fight, m'friend... very well done. |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
OH MY what strong words...my what strong words....espcially the last 3 lines... "ever since I have started to think like you. The society of man I have started to die like you" man oh man can i relate..well not that i CAN relate.but if i saw myself giving up my beliefs and principles and deny who i am...then yes i would be able to relate..what a wonderful poem indeed..strong and forceful  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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