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Wet
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

0 posted 2000-08-23 09:05 PM


My mind exploading with the troubles of life.
So many problems I can't handle.
My life means nothing,
Other than to make other people happy, and mad.
Soon I will know the point to my understanding.
I will have plenty of what I have been craving for,
Ever since I have started to think like you.
The society of man,
I have started to die like you.


© Copyright 2000 David Danielson - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-08-23 11:56 PM


Can't let this slip by...there's only one thing harder than losing sight of yourself--and that is to catch sight of yourself later...incredible...touched me much (ooooh!)

keep up the good fight, m'friend...

very well done.

JnR4eva
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 377
Bronx, NY
2 posted 2000-08-24 12:23 PM


OH MY what strong words...my what strong words....espcially the last 3 lines...

"ever since I have started to think like you.
The society of man
I have started to die like you"

man oh man can i relate..well not that i CAN relate.but if i saw myself giving up my beliefs and principles and deny who i am...then yes i would be able to relate..what a wonderful poem indeed..strong and forceful  


"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me



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