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Anti Ante (rebelling against rebel's challenge)
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Anti Ante (rebelling against rebel's challenge) |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374
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You pour your passion word first Into every story... verse by verse Your soul set aside for the game To tickle our fancies, to rattle our brain Words meant to tease, words to entangle Our thoughts and emotions on all that you gamble But these eyes will ignore post and plea For now I am anti-ante Too much I say I haven't all day So lay your words on the table As for me, I've had all I can handle!!!! *S*< !signature--> -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com [This message has been edited by ladysixstring (edited 08-23-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
well done guitargirl... *L*.... the Anti Challenge.... perfectly met! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The twist you gave this was superb! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey! Hey! -- Let's hear it for the little lady...you called yourself Clamity who???? Loved it. jwesley |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Loved this one! great work Jaimie... and nice to see you in person next to your more than impressive poetry... Way to go, guitarist...(by the way, do you need drummer accompaniment?)  regards, sudhir |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
voice well heard and the challenges can get a little out of hand...just poets seeking to push their muse. Way to go in your twist into the mess of challenges. Great verse. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This auntie likes your anti ante! |
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