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Unrivaled Bonds
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Unrivaled Bonds |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Unrivaled Bonds I can only converse with you in lexis only you may hear unspoken words that flow like wine through cyberspace and cross of line a passion shared, a love well met a chanced meeting to not forget floating soft in cyberspace captured in memory, then erased. Conscience speaks of write so wronged only in folio does this love belong only in a soul’s heart will this reside only in a moment in time to hide. Spent night well in loved one’s arms only in dreams do I share your charms. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O my god... a winner all the way... WOW Karilea, WOW, regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{~,^} thank you Sudhir... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just beautiful Sunshine. . . absolutely beautiful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Sven... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, you are never going to be able to keep what we have a secret if you keep writing like this!  I love it, btw  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer, haven't I told you to shhhhhhh?  |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
You somehow even make this sound romantic... "floating soft in cyberspace captured in memory, then erased." -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Lady, love should know no bounds...thank you... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now I know you gotta know how much I loved this little piece. It is not so tiny in message and yes it is very romantic....the ones I like the best.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
small packages, Mark, small packages... |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
wow what a lovley poem....i like to think of how i met my love.."floating soft in cyberspace" wow how beautiful that is "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, Karilea, just beautiful. What a wonderful piece, so accurately portrays the situation. catalinamoon |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JnR4eva, cantalinamoon...may you find peace and more in cyberspace... |
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