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Corazon
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since 2000-02-02
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0 posted 2000-08-23 09:54 AM


cards it is and
they both agreed
he smiled
he knew exactly
what he wanted
and she thought she knew
too
he explained the rules since
she had never played before
she thought she was ready
for this
so she tucked her how to catch a man
book under the chair
and batted her eyelashes (chapter2)
and smiled
admired his manly instructions (chapter3)
and smiled
and glanced to assure his clear view of her assets (chapter8)
and then almost choked
when he explained
that the ante was an article of clothing
but she was game
she held onto her coy smile (chapter3)
and desperately wished she hadn't skipped
to the end of the book
she must have missed an important
chapter or two
she didn’t remember anything like this
but she was ready, remember?
and knew she had nothing to worry about
she was wearing her
lucky panties
she met his gaze
and the game began

[This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 08-23-2000).]

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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-08-23 10:02 AM


Corazon...
         Ahhhh.....a good ol' game of strip poker......a great way to break the ice with a new friend!!!!  I love this, and it was fun to read.  Very nice writing!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
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Southern Abstentia
2 posted 2000-08-23 10:12 AM


not for long... in that thong... lol... if those panties are really lucky... rofl...

well done luvit...!!  

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
3 posted 2000-08-23 10:51 AM


wowowowow!!! this one is so HOT it sizzles... nice work, K... challenge surpassed by a fine deal of the words & lines...    
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-08-23 10:52 AM


THIS IS AMAZINGLY BRILLIANT....

regadrds,
sudhir

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-08-23 10:56 AM


Wow this is really something. Very well done.
Juls

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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United Kingdom
6 posted 2000-08-23 11:11 AM


ROFL....there must be a challenge somewhere and I think you've met it...*g*

HUSG

ggrn3
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since 2000-08-17
Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.
7 posted 2000-08-23 11:56 AM


Corazon
  This one was very, very well written.  I hope you didn't skip anything important in your book, because it seems he's ready to take it all, including your lucky ones.

Garfield

Corazon
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209

8 posted 2000-08-23 02:20 PM


thanks all, lol, and I almost didn't write this, it was in my mind, but got clouded over.....then I just put my fingers to it and .......well anyway, glad you all liked....and rebel...you shush bout my thong, I said lucky panties, not thong, people are gonna wonder
rofg
rofg

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
9 posted 2000-08-23 02:32 PM


This was great, Corazon...gave me a smile..hey, can I borrow your book?  
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
10 posted 2000-08-23 05:23 PM


Lucky panties, lucky girl. Clever poem.;P
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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11 posted 2000-08-23 06:45 PM


CARDS IT IS....,I LIKE THE POEM VERY MUCH.
Balladeer
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12 posted 2000-08-23 10:34 PM


Corazon, I see you know how to come through when the chips are down   This is very, er, invigorating !!
CAVECANEM
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since 2000-08-05
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Nevada USA
13 posted 2000-08-23 10:58 PM


I really enjoyed this, short but just kept going to the end...
Corazon
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209

14 posted 2000-08-24 09:26 AM


thanks again, glad you all enjoyed, and bal, glad you found it so invigorating lol
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