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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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cards it is and they both agreed he smiled he knew exactly what he wanted and she thought she knew too he explained the rules since she had never played before she thought she was ready for this so she tucked her how to catch a man book under the chair and batted her eyelashes (chapter2) and smiled admired his manly instructions (chapter3) and smiled and glanced to assure his clear view of her assets (chapter8) and then almost choked when he explained that the ante was an article of clothing but she was game she held onto her coy smile (chapter3) and desperately wished she hadn't skipped to the end of the book she must have missed an important chapter or two she didn’t remember anything like this but she was ready, remember? and knew she had nothing to worry about she was wearing her lucky panties she met his gaze and the game began [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 08-23-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Corazon... Ahhhh.....a good ol' game of strip poker......a great way to break the ice with a new friend!!!! I love this, and it was fun to read. Very nice writing! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
not for long... in that thong... lol... if those panties are really lucky... rofl... well done luvit...!!  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
wowowowow!!! this one is so HOT it sizzles... nice work, K... challenge surpassed by a fine deal of the words & lines...  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
THIS IS AMAZINGLY BRILLIANT.... regadrds, sudhir |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow this is really something. Very well done. Juls |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
ROFL....there must be a challenge somewhere and I think you've met it...*g* HUSG |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Corazon This one was very, very well written. I hope you didn't skip anything important in your book, because it seems he's ready to take it all, including your lucky ones. Garfield |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks all, lol, and I almost didn't write this, it was in my mind, but got clouded over.....then I just put my fingers to it and .......well anyway, glad you all liked....and rebel...you shush bout my thong, I said lucky panties, not thong, people are gonna wonder rofg rofg |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This was great, Corazon...gave me a smile..hey, can I borrow your book?  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lucky panties, lucky girl. Clever poem.;P Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
CARDS IT IS....,I LIKE THE POEM VERY MUCH. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Corazon, I see you know how to come through when the chips are down This is very, er, invigorating !! |
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CAVECANEM Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 43Nevada USA |
I really enjoyed this, short but just kept going to the end... |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks again, glad you all enjoyed, and bal, glad you found it so invigorating lol |
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