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Lost in His Soul
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Lost in His Soul |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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~ Lost in His Soul ~ by poetFemmeFatale He breathes as I breathe - our senses the same His touch is the thunder & I am the rain. The stars above gave us the very same soul He whispers, I listen - together we're whole. He is the passion & I am desire He is the ember of my purest fire. Whenever he speaks, his words hold my heart He's my reflection though we are apart... I know where I am - I am lost in his soul Longing to reach him, though not in control. To reach out & touch him, I know he would feel A touch so secure & a love so sureal... I echo his pain but I catch all his tears They go in my pocket - I've held them for years. Tear-stained, I lean in to soft kiss his eyes I hold him with words as his soul softly sighs... He hears all my thoughts as his eyes close in sleep My soul truly loves him - may stars this wish keep - Wish as I may as I feel him tonight Be lost in his soul - yet be his guiding light... Inspired by,"Yet another soul is lost in my eyes..." B.S.H. [This message has been edited by poetFemmeFatale (edited 08-23-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hey! Nice to read you again! This is stunning. Deeply romantic and beautiful. I expect to see more from you soon!  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Wow Jen.... talk about a blast from the past... been many moons since I've seen you..."He is the passion & I am desire He is the ember of my purest fire." -- great work here.... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
**giggling** Probably two of the only people left in here who remember me!! LOL This is good though, right? ROFLMAO Thanks guys for reading! Who ARE all these new people anyways? LOL Better get to shaking hands, eh?  Everyone here is gonna be thinking I'M new too! *sigh* Hi, my name is Gennifer, and I'm a poem-aholic. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderful, wonderful all the way... where have you been pFF.... missed your lovely poetry a lot.... My regards, sudhir |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yep, this is what we call love. Corinne |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I believe our response is.. Hi Gen!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
TRUST ME BABY..... YOU LEAVE AN IMPRESSION WHERE EVER YOU GO... YOUR A LEGACY HERE... NO ONE WHO KNEW YOU COULD FORGET YOU...   and this poem is a perfect example of why... this is just exquisite Gen... written with your signature passion for life so glad to see your words of grace back in the forums my friend... welcome home girlie-girl love ya me There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I was wondering when you would grace us with one of your works.....havent heard from you since the kiss in prose. This is a beautiful verse you bring and as JM(my good Bud and more)said....welcome home. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-24-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
GEN!!!!! Where have you been??? And what has happened to you?? This is very Romantic. . . different for you no?? Come on. . . you can tell me. . . it'll be our secret!! Seriously, welcome back, we've really missed you and I hope that things are going good. . . this poem is wonderfully romantic and sweetly divine. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
well, well, if it isn't the poem freak!! I have missed you sooooooooo much!!! I thought you disappeared forever. Been emailing you and I guess I have the wrong email address too. hope to read more from you. miriam miriam coronado |
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Brent Hotchkin Junior Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 42Florida,USA |
Gen you are truly amazing. You never cease to warm my heart. Thank you for all. We come from the same light.  We are all blessed that you are back! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Gen is back, missed you. I still have the opening paragraph to our poem, maybe we can actually finish it LOL. I don't know how long you have been back but long work hours means that I can't spend as much time as I want at Passions. Anyway a beautiful poem, tender and delicate. Welcome back "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Gen, I am not new, but have been at Dark Passions until recently. This is the most gloriously perfect poem, romantic, flawlessly written. I am overwhelmed. It hit me directly in the heart. Thanks. Catalinamoon Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Silkdragon Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 65 |
Well, this is the first of your work that I've read, since I'm pretty new here (as you can see by my pathetic number of posts), but it was beautiful. Very touching and deeply romantic. Great work! Erin |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Gennifer, so vey nice to meet you! YOU have given words to all that is in my heart. So very nice to read you...I will be sending this to a very special someone and I am left saying a very heart felt thank you. This so very beautiful and truly from the depths within. Your words are exquisite and the flow of it all was perfect. Welcome Back, so glad you came. Giving you a warm hearted smile. Jenn E |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
"He breathes as I breathe - our senses the same His touch is the thunder & I am the rain. The stars above gave us the very same soul He whispers, I listen - together we're whole." --Incredible, PFF. I've missed you! Welcome back, and keep on posting! Lovely work here. *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Tear-stained, I lean in to soft kiss his eyes. I hold him with words as his soul softly sighs.." My goodness you have some beautiful lines in this poem Femme...excellent writing..such a pleasure to read....James |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful to read you again PoetFemme! This was beautifully romantic ... such tender sentiments reaching out and back to reminisce on how deeply you are connected to this soul. Very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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