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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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In the beginning Our God created an end We don't understand. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
words deep and profound thought provoking verse so true Sy is true poet Exceptional writing regards sudhir p.s. looks more like a senryu... but I am just learning... ask Marge/Liz/Janet/Karilea/Kaile/? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So few words, such a large message... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, AWESOME,so true, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Thank you my friend. Sunshine, You shine through the night. *L* Cerenity, Thank you for the awesome, love back. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Seymour.. I don't believe I have ever heard a more profound statement in such a beautiful simplistic form. This thought will follow me today! Your work is always inspiring to me...... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, And your comments are always a pleasure to read. *L* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Seymour God the end had seen 'Ere we began, beginning and has mercy planned. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I am so glad to see God slip into your poetry.He certainly does provoke philosophical thought. This is a perfect Haiku, so much presented in a few short words Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"We don't understand." and me thinks we never will .. but then .. me thinks ... we dont need too ... it will happen either way ... deep deep ...YOU ARE .. even in your briefs LOL I mean breviety  LOLlater-profound Haiku-gator jm |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry, Thank you for the haiku and here is one for you. Subjective wineskin Holds the anaesthetists wine With a hemlock grin. Elizabeth, I love you too. Janet, Nothing like diving deep. Lovely gator. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are really good at this ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, And you are really good. *L* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ok this is not the place for a challenge but you started it. poison flowing deep from the wineskin's dark bladder alcoholics make. Be well Keth "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear Seymore, A beauty and thought provoker. I look at "the end", as a end to strive, struggles and sin. Thanks for a most enjoyable read. Love, Marcy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, The challenge remains And blind faith to me is strange Takes two to make one. Alle'cram, Thank you and I do too. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Deep, Powerful.....WOW! This speaks so much truth. Great write. Jenn E |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jenn E, Thanks for the read and WOW. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Seymour Where's the challenge here when two entwined together makes the perfect whole.  Keth "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You say so much with so few words! corinne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Thank you so much. *L* Kithry, The whole is illusion Two may touch but not entwine The circle swings wide. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
The circle winds back collapsing on itself now imitating life "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Let us have our dreams holding hope where, there is none before the time ends. This is getting ridiculous >:P Kithry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Excellent, a very powerful piece! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry, Yes at least let us have hope. Thank you for all the responses. Eagle one, Thank you so much for the read and comment. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 08-26-2000).] |
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