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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-23 08:11 AM

I see the hills covered
in silent hues of biege
that whisper your name
give your love a peace
continue that slow groove
feeling upon which
I have thought gratefull
moments could not surrender.
To that, I have seen
dreams collide with reality
bringing on their own
form of prosperity,
of life's little trickles
that we held close
to hearts that beat
as a rythem consummed.
What graced our plate
was devoured and loved
in sweaty evenings delight
brought on by lust,
But, what the hell
how many of you can
remember the last time
you lost yourself in another.
The sweat sounds of extasy
mingling with the heat
that two engines on fire
create at speed,
that upon completion
you both lay in wonder
at the meaning of all
things under the stars.
Hey, it's not science people
it's all good.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

1 posted 2000-08-23 09:08 AM

You hit the nail right on the head Michael!!!
Simplicity can be a wonderful feeling. Oh, and so can the other you descbribed!

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2000-08-23 10:11 AM

Hi Michael....
YES!!!!!! This is excellent!! I loved the images that popped up in front of me as I read.......great job here!

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

ladysixstring
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 374

3 posted 2000-08-23 08:27 PM

Very lustful imagery here! "of life's little trickles that we held close
to hearts that beat" Last line got a smile too!!

-jaimie

Website: www.ladysixstring.com

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

4 posted 2000-08-24 11:29 AM

To that, I have seen
dreams collide with reality

some very beautiful lines here, Michael
~~soft smiles
Maureen

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

5 posted 2000-08-24 01:05 PM

I love the title, "Give the Bed a Call"......Hellooooooooo Bedddddddddd, I 'm calling. LOL.
It is "all good" , such a perfect ending.
Warmest of smiles
Jenn E

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