Open Poetry #9 |
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Passion's Wake |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada ![]() |
Passion's Wake Let passion be your guiding light, To soar with me to greater heights. Take hold my hand and follow me, Dive in the realms of ecstasy; Drink from the fountain of my soul, To quench desire a thousand fold. Light up my senses, each in turn, To fan the flame within that burns; Partake of me, this sweet delight, Explore my depths within your sight. With gentle gaze, caress my eyes, As lips emit a wanton sigh; Devour the nectar of my kiss, To lose yourself in savored bliss. Breathe in the scent that emanates, While fervent drum beats resonate; Give way to hunger deep within, To light a fire upon my skin. Surrender to my true desire, As senses climb and hearts conspire; Enrapture me in passion's wake, As souls entwine to satiate. /Kit McCallum *I tucked this poem in my husband's birthday card today* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Kit, Ah, so wonderful .... What lovely command over the language you possess.... always enjoy your poems... regards, sudhir |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
WOW......would have loved to have seen his face when he read it.....lol You can plainly see where your heart and soul are and who brings it out best...beautiful writing~ |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
I, too, wish I could have seen his face... beautiful gift!!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I bet your husband will grin all day long just thinking about what a beautiful gift you gave him!!! Words stay in the heart longer than any material gift you could give! Beautiful writing here, but that is always the case with you, my friend!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
WOW! Kit, what a lucky guy, to have a fabulous poet and passionate lover, all rolled in one. That man has a smile on his face that won't quit, I'll bet a million on that! Love, Ellie P.S. While I'm here I want to thank you for all your sweet responses to me! Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Sudhir: I can't thank you enough for this wonderful comment Sudhir ... that truly meant a lot to me! ![]() ~Butterflies: Thank you so much Butterflies ... he's my inspiration for many poems! ![]() ~LadySixString: The gift was the "easy" part ![]() ~Sunny: Oh Sunny, what a lovely comment, thank you so much!! ![]() ~Ellie: You're so welcome Ellie, I very much enjoy reading your work, and thank you so much for this beautiful response! ![]() Much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wowee!! Hey, Kit, if he's too busy, my number is BR-549!!....as if any man would be too busy to respond to you! You are two very lucky people. I salute you both ![]() |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
There is nothing that compares to a gift from the heart. Beautiful post Kit!! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
"Take hold my hand and follow me, Dive in the realms of ecstasy; Drink from the fountain of my soul To quench desire a thousand fold." -- Very sensual work, Kit! I bet your husband truly loved this. ![]() *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW KIT!!!!!! GIRL....YOU LIT HIS CANDLES AND BLEW EM RIGHT BACK OUT ![]() THIS IS SO SENSUAL AND SINCERE AND SWEET. Happy B-day to Hubby... later-jump-out of his cake-gator ![]() jm |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Balladeer: Thanks Balladeer, for this sweet response ...I've got that number now ... watch out, just in case! ![]() ~Oh2beme: Thanks so much ... I agree, nothing better than a gift from the heart! ![]() ~Krista: He did enjoy it, and even blushed a bit ![]() ![]() ~Janet Marie: Sweet JM ... I just responded to your "going away post", and then came back and read your "gator-ending" here. Loved it! This will last me till I see you again! Thanks Janet Marie! ![]() Much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Kit, So sweet, beautiful and the flow, that is something I enjoy about your work just so complete thank you for being you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
What a sensual, loving poem. The fact that you get inspiration from you husband makes me smile. The coffee cup was a sweet gesture that will last his heart a lifetime. BUT, I am sure he is DIEING to get home to you to thank you. hehehehe ![]() Jenn E |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Very passionately sweet ! ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
A passionate poem indeed Kit! No need to ask if your husband enjoyed his birthday then!!! |
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Mona Lisa Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 100Halifax, Nova Scotia |
I loved this! Especially that last stanza. Your words sing right off the page. Beautiful rhyme, everything fits so lovely together. All I need to express my soul is a pen and paper. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderful poetry. A pleasure to read. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! Absolutely beautiful, Kit! Breathtaking! Denise |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Awesome work! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
There's absolutely nothing I can say that those above me haven't said - Yet I had to respond I envy your husband - I dream of being so loved - and so desired but more than that - having a wife/lover that is so talented |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Kit - What a lovely way to tell your husband you love him! It is written so well. He's obviously in way over his head with you - what a lucky guy! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Cerenity: Oh Cerenity ... what a beautiful comment ... thank you sooo much! ![]() ~Jenn: Makes me smile too Jenn! Thanks very much for the lovely response! ~Marge: He's an easy one to gain inspiration from ... thank you sweet Marge! ~English Rose: I "think" he enjoyed it English Rose ![]() ~Mona Lisa: Thank you so much Mona Lisa ... what a wonderful comment! ~Mike: Thanks Mike ... I'm so glad you enjoyed ... much appreciation! ~Denise: Oh Denise ... thank you so much, you're a sweetheart! ~EagleOne: Thank you for the awesome EagleOne ... very much appreciated! ~Wilfred: Oh Wilfred ... you've left me absolutely speechless. Thank you so much for this lovely response! ~LngJhn: Way over his head ... or perhaps I'm in way over mine? LOL ... thank you for this wonderful comment LngJhn! Much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow----what a heart you have and you bear it all. WOnderful verse and still loving it as I turn to go to bed. NITEE NITE and thanks for the beautiful poem to take me to my sleep. |
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