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to war the gloom
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to war the gloom |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Another night it's off to bed persistant thought of things unsaid No unache for aching head-- I tell me lies. I say you're dead. Loneliness inside a tomb, burning wax, to war the gloom and one for hope, an embryo, That I am love, that yearns to grow, these walls I kick-- a loving womb... insistance taunts the rise of bread. I wish that you were here again. I wish too much again my friend. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
beautiful, serenity...the perfect touch of longing and sadness...and perhaps regret. I would call it one of your best... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
If balladeer says so it is so... but I would reserve the "best" word for something that will come ... for that is an aim, is it not... O serene One, this is moving and exquisite in the way the whole sentiment is expressed... and that has been one of your hallmarks... A fantastic expressin of impression... regards to you, sudhir |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Friends are important in all phases of life hope that you get all that you wish for. Rich |
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