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Dawn - my humble offering.
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Dawn - my humble offering. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia 
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Dawn The stars are still shining bright as the moon slowly slips away, preparing for it's slumber as the sun comes out to play. One by one the stars go out like candles snuffed by an unseen hand, but instead of darkness, the sun comes up, spreading colour across the land. The changes of each dawn hold me spellbound with their charms as the sun lights up my world and cradles it in it's arms. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
The changes of each dawn hold me spellbound with their charms as the sun lights up my world and cradles it in it's arms _____________ Dee, This is SPLENDID WORK.... what a first post... lovely...  WELCOME TO PASSIONS many regards, sudhir |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Welcome Dee....what a lovely start!!!! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Dee this is very beautiful. And welcome to Passions !!! Juls |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Dee, The poem is absolutely lovely in every way. You're such a natural poet, dear friend. Welcome to the family here at Passions. I'm so happy to see you here. Michael |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Dee* What a beautiful entrance poem...your imagery was superb! Welcome to Passions, I hope you enjoy your stay and I look forward to many more of your poems in the future~ |
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American Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-21
Posts 49USA |
Dee, This is so pretty. I feel like I'm right there watching the sunrise on the beach! I enjoyed it. Welcome! American Princess |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions Dee - You've written about one of my very favorite subjects... the best time of day - and you've done it beautifully... Check your mailbox for a special greeting..  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
..."the moon slowly slips away, preparing for it's slumber" Hello, Dee, and a very warm welcome to you. This poem is so nice, especially the image of the moon, slipping slowly away to slumber. Just wonderful. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sudhir, English Rose, juliet, butterflies, American Princess and Meadowmuse, thanks for your kind words and the welcome. I think I will like it here. Nan, the card made me feel very welcome. Thanks. Michael, I know no matter what I write about you will be full of praise. Thank you for your support. I'm pleased you all like my poem. Love, Dee |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
hello dee and WELCOME TO PASSIONS  .you have come to passions with a beautiful first poem...I would love to read more in the future...nice work  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
An excellent entrance, welcome! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~What a lovely way to make an entrance. Wonderfull writting! Beth~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
JnR4eva, EagleOne, Beth, Thanks for the welcome. I'm glad you liked this one, another one coming up tonight. I appreciate the encouragement. Dee |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful descriptive writing...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Welcome to the Dawn bright the day, welcome also to you. This is naturally lovely. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks James. I'm glad you liked it. Dee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ Welcome to Passions. Your poem depicts a lovely view at evening closing and dawn beginning. I particularly enjoyed your reference to the stars being snuffed out one by one. Cleverly done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks Kethry and Marge, You have all made me feel very welcome. Dee |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Dee, splendid work again. Put chill bumps all over me. Hope to see more of your work. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dee, WELCOME to Passions! This piece lifts me up rightfully so! Well done, and hope to see much, much more of you!  Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely! Corinne |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Just beautiful, Dee Welcome ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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