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You always find my smile
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You always find my smile |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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I love the way you make me smile every time I see you so charming, happy, warm inside and always there to be true No matter how I feel that day whatever's on my mind you always know just what to say my smile you always find No matter if I'm strong or weak you're right there with a hug and kiss upon my chin or cheek you always show your love You laugh, you smile, you cheer me up with the sweetest playfulness you giggle and tickle my spirits up you're just so good at this!  You're cartoons and candy and big tedi-bears you're cuteness and tenderness too you're one of the few that just truly cares when others just have'nt a clue I just want to thank you for being that friend that overcharged bundle of joy  and showing that you'll always stay 'till the end our friendship I do so enjoy  I love ya with all my heart, babe!! {{{KISSES}}}Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Hmmm, I can see you reading this poem to someone very dear and special to you as their heart melts, with each line, all over the floor... bring wet wipes... it could get messy. So beautiful and loving. BTW "you giggle and tickle my spirits up" is absolutely adorable. -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awww....really awww....I liked this one very much. I love poems about friendship or letting someone know how special they are. This is terrific! Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Friends make the world go round...your poem has me "spinning"  what a beautiful gift to your friend, thank you for sharing it for all to see~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Beautifully written, looks like you might be getting off the bridge of sighs. A beautiful and loving gift to give a friend.  |
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Fairy Princess Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 64Fitchburg Ma, USA |
aww...it's really nice toward someone you love. I'm only 17 but hey what the hell I'm supoesed to fall in love.  ~Fairy~ |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
This is perfect! I felt as if I was reading my own thoughts! Thanks so much for sharing this...I'm going to forward this to a friend, if you don't mind! ~*Irie leaves with a smile*~ ~Sheri |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
ladysixstring ~ One never knows about that... lol She would'nt be the only one. LOL Thank you Saunni ~ Thank you so much for your kind words. Butterflies_dont_cry ~ Yes they do... I'm glad I could do that to you If you get dizzy and sick, dont be afraid to e-mail me and give me a hard time lol Thank you.Marsha ~ Bridge of sighs? Is this a good or bad place?? LOL Thank you.Irie ~ Thank you so much... No, I dont mind |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
ThUnDeRkYsS "No matter how I feel that day whatever's on my mind you always know just what to say my smile you always find" Your words are so lovely and true. I will come back for more of your poems! didi |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
NICE WORK, THUNDER! It reminds me of one I wrote... let loose that smile don't worry, I'll catch it, but if you don't let go I'll tickle you and snatch it and if I can't get it by the bottom of your feet or your ribs or tummy then I'll yank you from your seat I will take you in my arms put the mistletoe above you kiss you smack-dab on your hidden smile and tell you that I love you and if that doesn't work if that still ain't right I'll rip your clothes off and start a pillow fight and we'll make love hard at first and then slow it to a creep and satisfied, you'll drift off I know you smile in your sleep < !signature--> ~shadows dance by the light within~ [This message has been edited by passing shadows (edited 08-20-2000).] |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
ddgoose ~ Thank you passing shadows ~ Thank you very much... Your poem is wonderful!! This puts a great big smile on MY face as I read it! LOL So, you knew how to find it too... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
any time, cutie  |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Well uh...this is a little uh "sweet" for me - but very nice anyways! How nice to have someone so "bubbly" in your life! That extra "energy" is nice at times, I do agree! I try to surround myself with upbeat people, as they are so much nicer to be around! ROFL Thumbs up on all your happy sappy poems sir! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
passing shadows ~ pff ~ Thank you, Thank you!!! I always enjoy hearing from you |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this was a poem filled with such joy and happiness really brings a smile! smiles are catching as you know so when you read this just so you'll know ( i'm |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Rosebud1229 ~ Thank you... knowing I made made you makes me LOL |
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