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Open Poetry #9

Seasoned With Love

English Rose
Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 211
Berkshire, England

0 posted 2000-08-22 11:37 AM

Winter is when you are gone.
The absence of your touch hurts
And the sun hides behind the veil that you throw
                              across your smile.

Then I see you again
And Spring bursts in the door beside you;
Your very presence banishes all dark from inside me.

As we go further on
Our life becomes a Summer of love.
Birds fly in a blue sky and the world begins to
                                    turn faster.

Our Autumn will be together.
Life takes on a steady pace
And the things that left me cold in Winter, perish
                                 in my heartflame.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2000-08-22 11:48 AM

Well written, my friend, something I'd been proud to call my own...

jwesley

English Rose
Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 211
Berkshire, England

2 posted 2000-08-22 12:03 PM

Gosh thanks Jwesly...I have read your poetry and I take that as an enormous compliment!!!!

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

3 posted 2000-08-22 12:09 PM

English Rose, What a wonderful job you have done with this. I love the way you use the seasons and the imagery it brought to my mind. Beautiful piece. Bonnie

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

4 posted 2000-08-22 12:11 PM

very sweet, and filled with promises that, hopefully, are as sure as the seasons.

English Rose
Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 211
Berkshire, England

5 posted 2000-08-22 03:49 PM

I am glad you liked the imigery Bonnie...I worked hard on this one

English Rose
Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 211
Berkshire, England

6 posted 2000-08-22 04:27 PM

Thank you LngJhn...appreciate your words

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