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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 2000-08-21 10:44 PM


My forever gleams in jeweled tones
Which climb throughout the sky
With feathered touch you hold me here
Yet give me faith to fly...

Clouded tears are swept away
By your soft and gentle kiss
You hold the dawn within your gaze
And I want for it to stay like this...

I’d surrender autumn’s cool air
And the floating rays of sun
If beyond the crystal threads of time
Our souls could sing as one...

On pathways lined in silver ice
The light of me shall hold you
And beneath the Heaven’s sorrowed eyes
My love will guide you through...

Your words are etched upon my dreams
And your breath within my soul
I only wish that for eternity
Your face I’ll always know.


Happy Birthday sweetheart.
  


*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-08-21 10:57 PM


Krista, he'll love this...
Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2000-08-22 10:33 AM


very beautiful.....bet it's his favorite birthday present this year.
Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2000-08-22 11:48 AM


beautiful indeed... full of love and tender care...

regards,
sudhir

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4 posted 2000-08-22 11:57 AM


Favorite birthday present in a long time   I love it much, my sweetheart, now I just need to find a frame...   Thanks for making my birthday happy  

Abrahm Simons

"Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon

Alwye
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5 posted 2000-08-22 10:14 PM


Sunshine, Mark, and Sudhir- Thank you all so much.  

Abrahm- I am extremely glad you liked it honey.  


*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

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6 posted 2000-08-23 11:26 PM


well...  ahem  *blushes*  I feel like I'm eavesdropping or something...  LOL.  It's a great poem, though, krista, very touching.  No wonder abe likes it.  I'd like it if it were my birthday present.     great work!

erin

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7 posted 2000-08-24 01:27 AM


A precious jewel...
lovely...simply romantic and sucha dream come true.

If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao



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8 posted 2000-08-24 01:36 AM


p.s. I saw glimpses of eternity in this one...and then I realised that it's love
and that's the only glimpse we are permitted of eternity

If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao



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