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Faith to Fly- For Abrahm
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Faith to Fly- For Abrahm |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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My forever gleams in jeweled tones Which climb throughout the sky With feathered touch you hold me here Yet give me faith to fly... Clouded tears are swept away By your soft and gentle kiss You hold the dawn within your gaze And I want for it to stay like this... I’d surrender autumn’s cool air And the floating rays of sun If beyond the crystal threads of time Our souls could sing as one... On pathways lined in silver ice The light of me shall hold you And beneath the Heaven’s sorrowed eyes My love will guide you through... Your words are etched upon my dreams And your breath within my soul I only wish that for eternity Your face I’ll always know. Happy Birthday sweetheart.  *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Krista, he'll love this... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
very beautiful.....bet it's his favorite birthday present this year. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
beautiful indeed... full of love and tender care... regards, sudhir |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Favorite birthday present in a long time I love it much, my sweetheart, now I just need to find a frame... Thanks for making my birthday happy Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Sunshine, Mark, and Sudhir- Thank you all so much. Abrahm- I am extremely glad you liked it honey. *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Silkdragon Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 65 |
well... ahem *blushes* I feel like I'm eavesdropping or something... LOL. It's a great poem, though, krista, very touching. No wonder abe likes it. I'd like it if it were my birthday present. great work!erin |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
A precious jewel... lovely...simply romantic and sucha dream come true. If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
p.s. I saw glimpses of eternity in this one...and then I realised that it's love and that's the only glimpse we are permitted of eternity If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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