»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #9
»
Bedtime Stories
| Open Poetry #9 |
|
Bedtime Stories |
|
|
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
|
I haven't been the same since you came into my life You shared secrets with me now I am i am dieing to see have I found the paradise that I lost long ago you helped me look deep in my soul helped me found a way to be whole found a way to touch my soul Now I don't want to let it go maybe I made you up in my mind it has taken much too long now something has come over me and I don't know if your real or just something I've imagined now something has come over me will you set me free? something has snuck up on me I wonder if you can see 'cause something has got a hold of me now I know how it could be.... 'cause I no longer need the sky my arms are open wide and I don't need the air I just need you to be near and I don't need the stars just want to see inside your heart and I don't need the sun between you and it you've already won cause something has come over me I want you to set me free something has snuck up on me I wonder if you can see and something has a hold on me Now I feel how it could be and today I thought of you again leaving logic and reason behind making me unconcious head spinning overwhelming desire longing for you drifting in your arms a feeling i'll never forget tell me have you felt it yet? did I make you up in my mind? are you real? can I get over you? when the curtain drops? Never want to say goodbye something has come over me is it real? could it be? tell me will you set me free? something has snuck up on me tell me can you see? something has a hold of me Do you feel how it could be? < !signature--> Julie  [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 08-21-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Julie Ann Ferrer - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ooooohhh such a longful pleading filled with such deep spirits of passion. Lovely write my dear friend. I can relate somewhat to this right now.....but that is for the laters and not the nows. Loved it. |
||
|
Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
yep, I'd definitely say you've been bit...nice to see this kind of passion spinning heads.. |
||
|
T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
i told ya he was out there, didn't I... SEE????? "and i don't need the air I just need you to be near and I don't need the stars just want to see inside your heart and I don't need the sun between you and it you've already won" very cool... Tony |
||
|
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Mark thank you for replying and I am glad you related to this right now....all my wishes for happiness to you my friend.... Local Rebel~~Thanks for stopping by to read..... T.....well I guess but it wasn't written about any one person.....maybe I DID MAKE HIM UP WHO KNOWS.....but thanks for replying you are too sweet....just high hopes I guess of what COULD be.... Julie :) |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ya know, I've felt this way too...what a classic emotion...I still believe, though not now, one day...maybe |
||
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Keep Looking Julie. . . he's out there. . . Excellent poem. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
||
|
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you...for replying....so glad there is still hope for you....I am glad you liked it... Thank you Sven your replys are always welcome.... Julie :) |
||
|
ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
JulieAnn, It appears that you have given some of the charateristics of the type of love you are looking for. I feel a bug nibbling at your toes.(LOL)  Anyway, that love is out there. Don't give up the search.Excellent poem. Garfield |
||
|
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
he is out there...when you find him ask him if he has a brother will you? this is lovely JulieAnn. |
||
|
ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Beautiful writing, Julie... Such a need for somebody to Love, is'nt it? LOL Great job Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
||
|
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
garfield~~Thank you but really it wasn't about anything I want really at least not right now....I was listening to Madonna and was having a moment I guess...hhhmmm but someday..... thanks for replying... Paula~~ Like I said...don't need anything like that right now....thank you for reading and I am glad you liked it... |
||
|
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
thunder~~I didn't forget you I just didn't see you...thank you for reading....AAHH I guess it is just in the air right now.....must have caught the love bug for a minute...LOL Julie :) |
||
|
ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
I thought the whole thing was wonderful but this part... "'cause I no longer need the sky my arms are open wide and I don't need the air I just need you to be near and I don't need the stars just want to see inside your heart and I don't need the sun between you and it you've already won" just really stood out to me. Exceptional!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
