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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Romantic Angel Come to me tonight Rescue my broken heart Share with me thy light On wings of love Send her my wish Angel sent from above To the love I miss Open up your arms Renew this gentle spirit Protect me from harm Help me not fear it Romantic Angel Hear my gentle prayer Gentle spirit of love Share with me thy care ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Sven "On wings of love Send her my wish Angel sent from above To the love I miss" Oh such a romantic you are. Beautiful poem with to a special Angel. didi |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is beautiful, Sven. I've had a really rough couple of weeks and your poetry is like balm to the soul. I do so love to read your work! Thank you so much for taking the time to post your wonderful talent here.  --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Gentle spirit of love Share with me thy care" Sven, your heartfelt plea moves my own. This is lovely writing, reading, thinking, sharing. Thank you, my friend... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Sven, beautiful piece. YOur words could move oceans. Wonderfully done, my friend. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sven is the man of romance within his words the oceans sway and ladies join in with poetic dance as we men are left in much dismay All the ladies run to his side hoping for just one little kiss across the forums floor they will glide because Sven is one not to miss Beautiful verse my friend....it is no wonder you have them all swooning.LOLOL |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Yep, Mark got it right. I'm swooning big time. Totally beautiful Sven. Juls |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a beautiful romantic plea Sven I hope it worked out. I mean, if I was an angel I'd at least have to give you a listen based on how well written this prayer is. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I agree with Mark here Sven. if you continue to write such romance, you are going to have a the ladies of Passions in a frenzy! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Beautiful, simply beautiful "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Oh, Sven, this is so lovely. Do you go for the Grandmotherly type?  Just keep typing out these poetic beauties, you will have more angels than you'll know what to do with them. Very good job. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends!! dd, the last of them. . . well, ok. . . not really. . . thank you. . . Tennessee Angel, you are welcome. . . I'm so glad that I could give you a temporary respite from your days. . . thank you my friend. . . Claire, thank you. . . it would seem that we think alike these days. . . DE, move oceans? Well, I don't know about that. . . thank you my friend. . . Mark, thank you!! But I don't know that they're swooning over me. . . just my words!! LOL Juls, thanks. . . but don't swoon too far!! ethome, you mean you're not an angel?? Thank you my friend. . . Marina. . . stop it!! LOL No one is going to be in a frenzy over me. . . Please!! Thank you my friend. . . JnR4eva. . . thank you my friend. . . Marcy, the "grandmotherly type"? I don't know. . . what does your grandmother think of me? Thank you so much. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Sven, this is a beautiful prayer. I hope it is answered to your satisfaction. Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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