Open Poetry #9 |
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Fallen Angel |
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Poetry Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28Des Moines, IA |
Fallen Angel I call you fallen angel you were once so high to me You loved me from a far it made me feel so free The stars had shown much brighter then they ever had before And every night I wished upon them for the angel I adore Then angel you came home to me and you loved me for a time And like you said you'd never do you broke this heart of mine So I call you fallen angel but the faded stars still shine And I pray I'll find an angel who'll mend this heart of mine So good-bye fallen angel you'll no longer torture me I've given up on you and the love you made me see So to you and your new love I wish you both the best And I'll miss you fallen angel til the day I'm laid to rest I should not have been so blind and that I must confess But I loved you fallen angel so as I say good-bye I also say God Bless POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend? |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
This is truly a heartfelt poem here Poetry Princess. It's so sad and so full of imagery and emotions. This is a beautiful poem you have here and I'm glad that you shared. "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Princess, You do weave a tale that is very revealing of your heart. Love angel at a distance afar, and then lost, very nicely done. I'm glad I came by to read this. |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
"I've given up on you, and the love you made me see"... hard to do... brave strong piece! -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
lovely and sad poem, filled with emotions |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Fallen Angel Beautiful poem and nicely penned. didi |
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