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Moonlight Romance |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“MOONLIGHT ROMANCE” Have you ever been romanced, during a moonlit night? With loving lips and caresses, until the morning light? Watching moonbeams, glowing in the sky? And looking at the moon, as the night went by? Embracing each other, while we watched the dawn? And when the sun rose up, all of our cares were gone? Have you ever made love, by the edge of a silent pond? That lies in the soothing forest, over those mountains beyond? Or, as I held you close, and we stared at the stars above? Lying there, and touching together, asking you to be my ladylove? Didn’t we listen to the sounds, of wild flowers sleeping? During tender words whispered and soft smiles alluring? Do you want to have a romance, do you want to know “my” love? Then look deep into your heart, and follow it, to this lonely dove. Bill Charles |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Bill... Ahhhhhhhh.....your words are as warm and tender as the gentle moonlight of which you speak........Beautiful! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
There you go again Bill romancing from the heart to the written word and painting beautiful love pictures with the thoughts. Great poem wonderful read!! |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill Beautifully penned. You are such a romantic writing from the heart. "Embracing each other, while we watched the dawn? And when the run rose up, all of our cares were gone?" Ahhhhhhh Take me away to Camelot!!! didi |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Sunny, Thank you once again for your words of tenderness and and graciousness. It's always a pleasure to have you come by my place. Thank you again. Good morning ethome, Thank you so much for dropping in, you are always welcome. And also for the considerate and kinds words about my poem. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ This is just the nicest thought ... 'Didn’t we listen to the sounds, of wild flowers sleeping? During tender words whispered and soft smiles alluring?' Oh, how pleasurable. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi 'didi', Glad to see that you stopped by. And thank you for the kind words. I have one question if I may ask? When is your next posting? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Marge, Thank you Marge, for enjoying this poem that I have written. I have to admit, I also like this verse. Tells a lot. Thanks again for dropping by. |
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Poetry Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28Des Moines, IA |
Totally awesome. I love your poems they are so deep yet meaning full. Thank you for the reply I also would like you to read my lastest FALLEN ANGEL Let me know what you think Great Job Keep it Up POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Princess, Thank you for your considerate reply. And, you are very welcome, I hope it works, as it did for me. And I did get to Fallen Angel. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, it's been a long, long time...perhaps a time to be revisited... lovely! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Bill, your tender yet encouraging questions place throughout this poem makes me yearn for moonlight. Now all I need is the man.  Lovely thoughts here. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunshine, I am so pleased that this writing that I have done has brought forth thoughts to revisit. I do appreciate you taking the time to spend a visit with me. I hope the other visit works for you. Ahh yes Claire, I love the moonlight on a quiet, and peaceful night. Looking at the moon and the stars up above. Nothing like it. Thanks so much for coming by, and to share some of your inner thoughts. |
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Desi New Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 2 |
Beautiful poem. So romantic. Thank you for this lovely verse. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Desi, Thank you for coming by and for your kind comments. Stop by again. |
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