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Knowing Her
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Knowing Her |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
My love has no ending though my heart could loose control, my love has no feeling for the pain I have now. The surface of my body cannot react without your touch which at one time ignited me and gave me so much. But my love is now hidden in the caverns of distress for the loss of your kisses and the 4 a.m. carress. Though this road is new to me it travels much the same when my tears create torrents of rivers with your name. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Michael, Quite an emotional one, here... touching with some great lines.. I liked these... Though this road is new to me it travels much the same when my tears create torrents of rivers with your name regards,sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My love has no ending though my heart could loose control, my love has no feeling for the pain I have now. The surface of my body cannot react without your touch which at one time ignited me and gave me so much. But my love is now hidden in the caverns of distress for the loss of your kisses and the 4 a.m. carress. ============================ I know baby...I know... this is the part that sucks... my 3am ache is well documented in poetry... and i know it helps to write, as do you this is so well written Michael, and your rhyme is divine.... but as always with your work... it is the expression of emotions that shine. me |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Some wonderful lines... "The surface of my body cannot react without your touch" and "when my tears create torrents of rivers with your name. -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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