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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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You say your love is true for me, Then why did you let me leave? You tell me that you are confused, But do you not seek what is right to choose? My love for you is strong as ever, Where is that bond that you claim would be forever? Your faith in me you have misplaced, You have shun me away in a glass case, I know you seek me in your mind, Break yourself form the society’s bind, I will supply the strength that you will need, If only you would take the time to heed. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). [This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 08-20-2000).] |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
It's not really fair when someone says one thing, but there actions say another! I understand where you are with this one... Well expressed Xeonox ~Sheri |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
I wish I had read this first. This is such a sad poem yet it's so true. It's such a problem when one cannot accept themselves and...oh man let me not start with the rambling again lol. But great poem you have here, it speaks the truth  i enjoyed this a lot "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great poem....the hurt that comes from loving someone so much yet they keep jerking you around.....well you captured that hurt here real well! |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Thank you for your replies. I know now that I am not alone. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You are never alone cause you got me as a friend and you know that...I still say it feels unfinished but thats a good thing it suits the poem...talk to you soon |
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