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Which Way Is Up?
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Which Way Is Up? |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
As I sit here, condemned to a room of silence As the storm outside my window pours rain Watching upon my window, the precipitation condense Wondering if I will go insane. I don't know what's around the curve As I press on, drive on in my life I might have to deviate from my path; swerve Or I might have to face my plight. As the wind whispers through the trees And the day solemnly passes by I observe the dangling green leaves Knowing in the fall of season, most will die. Sitting here by myself, all alone With my life and soul all corrupt Deliberating whether or not to forge on Contemplating which way is up. Garfield |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
ggrn3... If this piece you've posted is of your true feelings then I truly hope your find your way UP! {{Hugs}} I'm sure you will find many friends here at Passions that will help you find your way. At any rate, this was well expressed and painted a picture for me so I could feel and understand these feelings. ~Sheri |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi ggm3.... Always forge on!!!!! Just do it at your pace and keep an eye out for the road signs......and it's much more fun with friends to share it with. You'll find that here at Passions!! (Nice writing, BTW) Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
I've had many of these days... and I still can't answer the question correctly. *S* I enjoyed the outlook on the leaves in fall. Perfect fit. -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Irie This was only a fictional poem although I have felt like this on many occasion. And I'll accept your {Hugs} anytime. Thank you so much for your hugs and comments. Sunny1 Stopped by to brighten by day did you. With your friendship, how could I not forge on. Thanks for your comments. Ladysixstring Of course you know which way is up. Any one as talented and inspirational as you are can't go but one direction. Thanks for your comments. Garfield |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OHHH man havent we all had days like this? Which way is up? Im doing good if I manage to get my feet on the floor LOL...Greta write here...looking forward to more from you. |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Mrs. Paula I know you must be firmly grounded. Contemplation on your behalf I can't imagine. But we do all have our good and bad days. Again thanks for your comments. Garfield |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
garfield, this is very well written... I like the way you contemplate... regards, sudhir |
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