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A Taste Of Your Gentle Lips
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A Taste Of Your Gentle Lips |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“A TASTE OF YOUR GENTLE LIPS” The picture effect, as my eyes gaze upon you, is a woman, with sensuous lips that has desire. Loving touches she craves, knowing not from where, perhaps one she has met, stokes the flames of her fire. Ruby red lips appearing, as they are shown, so soft and tender, to my most sensitive senses. The entirety of the smile I see that they make, is gentle, but hides her aches behind painful fences. Lips moist and wet, as the peaceful falling rain, and having bodily cravings, of heartfelt passion. I stare and they affect me to my inner being, and wanting them close is my only fashion. Suggestively painted with a deeper crimson, so enticing, when I see how they are apart. Warm they must be to another's kiss, but why not mine, it will come from my heart. You're temping me, and I'm beckoned, but please be aware, all I want is something to be said. My sensations are churning, and my thoughts run wild, I want to touch them with mine, as we lie in my bed. My longing heart desires, and craves for your response, for loving touches, and many warm caresses awaits you. So for an answer I listen, but one heard must be sincere, I’ll know by your words that encourage, and ones that ensue. Your voice whispers with all sincerity, and with much meaning, and it closes around my timorous heart, as it hears your reply. Hands touch and tightly clench, and many promises are spoken, as I become closer to those exciting lips, of one that will gratify. Lastly, together we lay, in the peacefulness of the night, and I touch you softly with my delicate fingertips. A flaming yearning comes from deep within my soul, as I desire, "A Taste Of Your Gentle Lips". Bill Charles |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
I found it all to be wonderful... but this particularly stood out to me as very well said... "Lips moist and wet, as the peaceful falling rain, and having bodily cravings, of heartfelt passion. I stare and they affect me to my inner being, and wanting them close is my only fashion." -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Sensuously and tastefully rendered, Mr. Bill. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Romance in supreme effect... lovely work, bill... regards, sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Bill.... The more I read this, the more I love it.....so sensual and passionate..... Nice way to start the day here! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi ladysixstring, Thank you for the considerate replies to this poem of mine. And thank you for stopping by for a read. Hello Alicat, Thank you for your kind comments. And thanks for coming by. Sudhir Iyer...Your comments are always welcomed to me, as they are so kind and meaningful. Thank you so much. Hi Sunny, Yes Sunny, I felt the same when I was writing this. Thank you so much, once again. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whew Bill, there are some pretty HOT undertones to this one...well done  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
mmmmmmmmmm just a taste? I think not...lovely |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Bill all I can say is you sure get into a lot of sensuous positions...tell me some of your secrets...James |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Hello Bill...desire is certainly fruitful inspiration for poetry, isn't it? You've shared your feelings very well in these words, dear. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill I don't think there are enough words in the English language to describe the feelings that come out from reading your poem. Another one of your romantic pens! didi |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi hoot_owl_rn, Yes, and there were very many of the undertones putting it together! Thanks for coming by. Hello Paula, Well Paula, so true, not just a taste. Thank you for your kind comments. It's very appreciated. Hey jmlee12345, I can say with all honesty, that you write with much romance and conviction. Any secrets that I have I would be willing to share with you. The heart tells all, and it must be followed. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow Bill, is it hot in here or is it just me, hehe. This is just excellent. Turning the air down now. Juls |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good evening Meadowmuse, Yes, you are so right, desire is quite a motivator. Thank you so much for your kindhearted comments. And nice seeing you again Claire. Evening 'didi', Nice to see you, and thanks so much for your warmhearted comments. I am very touched by what you have said, and hope to see another of your postings soon. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I watched this poem go up and down And knew that I wanted to read it Imagine Bill wanting to kiss me As though he really needs it I'd love to taste your tender lips But not there in your bed I'll do my kissing here, my friend I'll kiss you on the web Nice title, nice poem Liz |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi juliet_2u, Me thinks that it is maybe a little warm in here. But then again? Thank you for your kind comments to this one that I have written. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Elizabeth, It's so nice of you to come by my place. I do thank you. And, a lovely poem you have written for me. A poem you wrote, of tender lips. Soft as a dove, and touching, with gentle fingertips. M'mmmmmmmmm Bill Charles |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Bill this is once again amazingly romantic. You have a wonderful pen for romance and I love how the title gets tied into the beautiful flowing lines. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hello ethome, Nice of you to drop by, and read my little poem. I do appreciate your kind comments. I do admit this one took me a while, but I did finally complete it. And, I love romance, as one might tell! |
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