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I Tried
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Poetry Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28Des Moines, IA |
I Tried Looking into your eyes I feel a smile start to rise How do I tell you how I feel I fool myself and say it's not big deal My feelings deep down inside Will never change no matter how hard I try You mean a lot to me I wish you could only see I try to show you every day But you seem to look the other way I can't tell if you really care But asking you do I dare I don't want to be rejected or even be denied But atleast then I could say I TRIED |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Poetry Princess, I can't believe that this was at the bottom of the page with no replies. This is my first time by your place, I'm going to read the other poem that you have written. |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
This is really a heartfelt poem you have written for us...your emotions spill for this piece. Thank you for sharing  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and you know....sometimes that's all we can do....no shame in that. Nice work here... thanks. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I have agree with my good friend serenity here. . . sometimes, it's all you can do. . . Excellent poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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