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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
unedited...just starting with a title... ~Try Me~ you all challenge me say i can't do anything well what you all say means nothing to me i can do anything i pick dare just try me or better yet be me try me or try to be me live through me see what i see be anything you want to be and then we'll see who wins the game who gets the trophy who gets my name try me and i'll be everything that you need try me! Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
omg omg omg!!! this is my first 'not sad' poem!!! yay me!!!! Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Great poem! It provides the reader with an interesting view on judging people. Wonderfully done.  "The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Fantastic... I really like... "just try me or better yet be me" Bold - Strong - Gutsy feelings I get from this piece!! -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is SO YOU babe...I really really like.. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
great work hun. *hugs* i say this to people all the time. they think i cant do it. try me. you cant graduate. i did. you will never leave state. i did. i said try me. great job. i really liked it. =) love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
great work hun. *hugs* i say this to people all the time. they think i cant do it. try me. you cant graduate. i did. you will never leave state. i did. i said try me. great job. i really liked it. =) love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Nikolette ~hugs~ I'm so glad that you have written your first happy poem. Very well penned. I've also enjoyed your sad poems. They have all shown great character, strong emotion, sincerity, & thought. I very happy to smile with you instead of cry with you. All your poems have been great. I look forward to reading many more. Garfield |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
jesses...heheh yeha *bugs hugs and kisses*... ggrn3....you have inspired me tonight...thank you Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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