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bobbi New Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 9USA |
This intensity Burning inside of me Echoes thoughts of you Inside my mind Resounding your eyes back at me Raw emotions Maybe I need you Or maybe I need this Can you give me something real to hold on to? And not just a prayer for a dream? Should I wait for you? Should I wait for a kiss? Could I ever tell you? I need you more than this That in echoed thoughts of you we kiss Imaginary conversations unfold But I don't know what you say At least in dreams you're mine alone Echoed throughout my day |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Bobbi, passion and longing bleed from every line.... |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Wow Bobbi...this HOT....very intense... my favorite part.....? I need you more than this That in echoed thoughts of you we kiss Imaginary conversations unfold But I don't know what you say At least in dreams you're mine alone Echoed throughout my day I can feel every emotion in this poem...hmmmm must be in the air!!!  Julie :) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~"Can you give me something real to hold on to?",....what very strong words you ask and with such desperation. This poem speaks volumes of want and need and passion. Well expressed. Nice writing. Take care B. *Peace. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really felt this one, it has great emotion. Great work  |
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