Open Poetry #9 |
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The Hope Chest |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina ![]() |
The Hope Chest An old hope chest, Now covered with dust, Laced with cob webs. Fancy latches, Now tainted with rust Sits appropriately alone, In a dark lonely corner, The attic now its home. Daring to open the lid, I am carried back in time. Back to the days of I love yous, When he was mine. I remove each treasure. All his letters I read. Then with tear filled eyes, I see what lies beneath. Folded delicately is the wedding gown. Once a dazzling pure white. The dress of my dreams now faded, Like the promises of a future bright. This article of celebration, Was never worn, This bride to be, It never adorned. Sadly I close the lid, On this once " hope chest ", Hoping tomorrow may be the day, These memories are finally laid to rest. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah Juliet... the hope in the chest... hope in my closet... wow thats the spirit then... A brilliant poem on a theme so dear to my heart... regards, sudhir |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sudhir, thank you so much. You're always so kind. Take care, Juls |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Jul, I can feel that memory and the sadness. I have a chest too, not officially a hope chest, but it has a lot of old momentos of loves past. I get very emotional whenever I get into it. This was just lovely. catalinamoon Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww Catilina thank you for the as always kind words. Funny how those things can stir our emotions huh? Take care, Juls |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Memories can often be hard to go to but when we do take that time to reflect it seems sometimes that the most powerful ones end up being the worst ones. You have to search for the good ones and when you find them you get sadder yet knowing what once was. Vicious circle. You have penned a beauty and it was lovely to read this morning. ![]() |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww thank you Mark. I'll let you know when I post that special one for that special person. I'm so excited about it. Juls |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Juliet, Memories seem to be what we want to relive sometimes... Nicely written. Deb BloomingRose |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
So true BloomingRose. Some of them are better just left hidden away. Thanks for the kind words. Juls |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Hope chests come in many shapes and sizes I think we all have a place to keep old dreams ... my grandmother used to have a walk in attic ... I can remember searching through its' treasures as a child and listening to the greatest stories, she would gladly share with all the grandchildren You've managed to stir this loving memory to me with your poem Thankyou ![]() [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 08-18-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Theres nothing wrong with memories...as long as memories dont rule your life...this is a sad bittersweet look into the past...lovely |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Very well done... I love the irony of the "hope chest" and the complete "hopelessness" in this one. -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Rex, reading your reply made me smile, thanks so much. Paula thanks for stopping in and sharing with me. Lady, you got it as it was meant to be and thank you. Thanks again guys, Juls |
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