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I told...I lied...
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I told...I lied... |
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Mel2Lizz Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 20Alamosa, Colorado |
I told myself I wouldn't write to you anymore.... I lied. I told myself I wouldn't think about you anymore.... I lied. I told myself I wouldn't look for you anymore.... I lied. I told myself I was better off without you.... I lied. I said he could make me happier.... I lied. I told myself you were better off with her.... I lied. I told myself you were a jerk.... I lied. I told myself not to wish on falling stars for you- and said "I didn't".... I lied. I told myself to not worry about you-and once again told myself "I don't".... I lied. I said that I hated you.... I lied. Because after all of the lies; I have tried to believe; there is one thing that remains.... I love you.... No lie! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sometimes it's so hard to get past what's in your heart. It's very hard to let oyur mind take over! Very well expressed Lizz....and Welcome to Passions!  ~Sheri |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Excellent job of portraying a freshly broken heart... very emotional and often weak willed. Strong expression here. -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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