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A Wish Upon My Star (repost)
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A Wish Upon My Star (repost) |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State 
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~*A Wish Upon My Star*~ Tonight~ I wished upon a star The brightest one I could see Brilliant~ As if shouting out loud “Please, come wish upon me!” Hypnotic~ I’m left gazing Staring into the night Mesmerized~ By your wonder Fascinated by your sight Twinkling~ Happy and full of life Celebrating how free you fly Promising~ So bold and strong Outshining the rest in the sky Blazing~ Are you there Do you really still burn? Infinite~ I beg you to be Please give me what I yearn Peacefully~ Smiling at me from afar Yet somehow you seem so near Serene~ You quietly speak to me Almost whispering in my ear Silently~ Cradle me in your light Please give to me what I wish Gentle~ Illumination reaches out On my cheek placing a kiss Smiling~ I’m left dreaming Of my wish I sent to you Wondering~ How long I shall wait? Forever, ‘till my wish comes true Tonight~ I wished upon a star The brightest one I could see You~ My love, are that shinning star And I wished for you to fall upon me ~Sheri |
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Tepok Bopar Junior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 27 |
May your dreams come true Irie. Beautiful poem here. Cheers Tepok. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh yes, I did enjoy this one much....I liked this dose of hope...made me smile, think I'll keep this one near to my heart today...thank you Irie.... |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Tepok... Many Thanks to you ...I have many dreams that I wish to come true.  Serenity... I'm glad I made someone smile today! I hope things look up for you! ( if I interpreted right)! *smmile* and hugs! Thank you for your reply ~Sheri |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
wow! I love poems that talk about stars and starlight. this was one of my favorites. I liked the ending. nicely done. "The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Thanks so Much dawn..... I'm so glad you enjoyed! Stars are awesome aren't they? ~Sheri |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ooohhh i love this one... lovely imagery laced with soft sensuality.. very creative and special work here Irie... superb writing take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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