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What does a dream consist of?
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What does a dream consist of? |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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What does a dream consist of? Can it always fill our needs? Are there any hidden outlines? Can it be anything we see? Is it a taste or certain texture We capture in our mind? The smell of stormy weather We long to ever find. A dream is but a figment Of that we crave to be A running of a fable That encompassed us to see. That everyday we need one To get us to the next Without it we are helpless No vision for what’s best So close your eyes and see me Include me in your dreams A dream is love imagined To be everything we need. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
What a disarming missive, this. A lovely and insightful poem...I enjoyed it. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Exactly... "A dream is but a figment Of that we crave to be" What a perfecty wonderful discription!! -jaimie http://www.ladysixstring.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A dream, a dream I wish to be, to be loved, myself, consistently, awareness spoken in my mind, to know the the joy, discovered kind... each day each thought each touch sublime... to know, to grow, each day, a find.... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
A great read as I myself am about to drift off into the dream world. Gosh, time for bed already! Great poem  |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you all so much and Serenity nice poem thanks Rich |
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