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If I - Would You? (continued)
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If I - Would You? (continued) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“IF I – WOULD YOU?” (continued) If I kissed your soft lips and you were inspired, Would you kiss me back, with ones of burning fire? If I tasted your sweet ruby red lips in the bright sunlight, Would you kiss me back, sometime around midnight? If I touched your soft lips with many kisses, Would you then be, my beautiful princess? If I touched you and you sighed with delight, Would you let me take you there, this very night? If I touched you all over here and there, Would you show me, how much you really care? If I held you close with our passions burning, Would you have thoughts, and begin to start yearning? If I made a vow to love you with passion, Would you give me your love, without question? If I and you together made mad passionate love, Would you coo for me, like a sweet turtledove? If I made love to you and we made a boy, Would you still love me, and maybe jump for joy? If I made love to you and we made a girl, Would you still love me, when you looked at our little pearl? If I lay with you upstairs in our great big bed, Would you whisper how you want me, under the spread? If I slept in another bed every night alone, Would you be heart broken, for me to come back home? And if I would come home and stay for good, Would you really like it, if only I could? Bill Charles |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Hey Bill This one is hot. I'll leave it at that. Garfield |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill If your sweetie doesn't answer "yes" to all of the above - I'm available. Just love it. It really expresses love and tenderness. You keep writing and I'll keep reading. didi |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi ggrn3, Thanks for stopping by to read this little one that I did. Appreciate it very much. Hi 'didi', , , thanks for coming by. And thanks for the yesses to all of the above. So, you're available huh? Again, thanks for the kind words. |
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Poetry Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28Des Moines, IA |
Bill Thanks for reading my peoms I really appriciated hearing from you. I decided to look up some of your writing and I find this one very sweet and emotional. I loved it. Also I was wondering how you get your pic to come on here like it does. I have a pic but don't know how to do it. So please write me back and let me know RJPICR@aol.com Randi Thanks AGAIN POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad sometimes that in a dying relationship, the answer is "no" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Poetry Princess, I certainly thank you for your considerate comments to my writings. I loved doing this one, and will probably add to it in the future. Hi passing shadows, Yes, I do agree that the answer can be no. But just think Passing Shadows, when the answers are "yes", and how so very wonderful that would be. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Wow is all I can say! Kathleen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Irish Rose, Thanks for the very kind wow. I enjoyed doing this one, and will continue it sometime in the future. |
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