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Another Time |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
With star blazing eyes she blooms in spring While his muscles have already formed It was not meant to be built on such innocent lies Yet it is here that their love was born She told of her life through wishes and dreams And he told of his conquering quests Yet neither of them told of their truth It was together: they both could forget As time passed by more words they wrote With feelings they gave up so free It was as if: they could not be wrong And together, they were meat to be She, his queen and he her king In a land they built in stone But neither of them had told of their truth So they could not make it their own The souls of fire and passion’s flames Are embers that burnt out and died Now both of them sit in front of the screen As tears come on: and they cry That line in which they dangerously crossed Is now but a sparkle up in the sky And even though they are miles apart They both will look up and sigh Time is such a treasure Yet the wrong time can be so cruel As passion is much more then pleasure It can make the best of us fools © tori 2000 If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh so very true and so very well said. Crossing ANY line can be a dangerous thing to do. I so much enjoyed this read.  ~Sheri |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thank you Sheri I'm glad you enjoyed the read... If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
a lesson in honesty - well told ~S~ - I liked this a lot |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thank you kindly Wilfred If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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