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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

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0 posted 2000-08-16 03:16 AM

Glory Rises

Suns glory rises
Over cobalt horizon
Diamonds kiss the sea

Dark Angel
August 2000

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 08-16-2000).]

jfilius
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since 2000-08-14

Posts 29

1 posted 2000-08-16 04:09 AM

Very cute! short and sweet.

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-08-16 06:27 AM

Good one! I could visualize this!

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

3 posted 2000-08-16 06:39 AM

DA* This is beautiful.....I'm in Haiku envy

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

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Blue Heaven

4 posted 2000-08-16 08:38 AM

Night wings see morning
in such a beautiful way
a jealous moon sets

The world loves being seen in your eyes Maree

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2000-08-16 09:32 AM

Maree....you've painted a magnificent picture with only 10 words

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

6 posted 2000-08-16 06:55 PM

Hi Dark Angel,

Very lovely can see it now in my mind, thank you its beautiful.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2000-08-16 06:59 PM

Excellent Dark Angel ... a perfect visual in so few words ... amazing!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

8 posted 2000-08-16 07:22 PM

Nicely done Mmy

K

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2000-08-16 07:31 PM

Dark Angel,
So much with so few. Nicely done.

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

10 posted 2000-08-17 01:25 AM

such intense beauty...truly glorious.

Wonderful Haiku my friend, you have an incredible talent for these!

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

11 posted 2000-08-17 01:43 AM

I have no problem picturing this thought
Well done

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