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Open Poetry #9

Where is all the noise?

redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

0 posted 2000-08-15 11:03 PM

There's way too much noise
in here
the cartoons, the cars, the toys
Stop that yelling
stop that running
ask your mother
I'm telling

stop the noise..
I can't think
go away for just a moment

and in the blink of an eye

There's way too much noise
in here
the empty rooms, the echos of laughter
there's no yelling
there's no running
there's no mother

and there's no telling

Where is all the noise i cursed
the ones which now are sorely missed

*footnote..
OH what joy our children bring with that wonderful noise.. and I try to stop long enough to enjoy it. For it will be gone all too soon.

[This message has been edited by redwriter1 (edited 08-15-2000).]

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

1 posted 2000-08-16 12:47 PM

check your email for my reply

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

2 posted 2000-08-16 07:57 PM

tears again and bttt to serve as a reminder to us all (sob)

redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

3 posted 2000-08-16 11:25 PM

I'm sorry Jeffrey, didn't mean to make you upset.. (sigh)

Kay-lynn
**A dream is a wish your heart makes :)

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

4 posted 2000-08-16 11:30 PM

Didn't make me upset Kay-lynn......just made me think and appreciate the I will have with my kids when I get to see them again (smile)

The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller)

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2000-08-16 11:32 PM

very touching and poignant, Red.......

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
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6 posted 2000-08-17 12:35 PM

I think my favorite sounds are those that 2 year olds make... very lovely

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

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