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When If Is Gone...Marks Challenge
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When If Is Gone...Marks Challenge |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
If and when have come and gone And gone is here to taunt Did we give up too soon? Did we try to hard To make love happen between us? Did we create a fantasy That was just too real? Too much too soon too real for you If and when forgotten out of fear Love left to die in the gone [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Regrets are none upon "if's" that have passed as each "when" carries with it memories to forever last Time for the now and thens as each now is real and thens are memories from which not to steal Your now is without me and the thens are there spread your wings and soar you have much to share. challenge met.(gold medal) [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Can't help but feel this one Paula...Your heart shows within every line...Challenge met and exceeded with feeling~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, way to pass this challenge by with out a problem. I wish it was that easy for everyone  |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This sure is overflowing with emotion. Paula,...WoW. Well done. All those questions after something like this fails....you have passed with honors, this challenge. Take care now. *Peace. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Paula, This is so well done... regards, sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
felt every line of this P,... you know that I know ...quiet comfort i hope you also know what i say about reality... it BITES...*smile* challenge well met...as I knew you would take care jm |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mark...thanks for the sweet reply Bdc...I do tend to wear my heart on my sleeve...better there than locked away dont you think? Lakewalker...LOL thank you...easy? if you only knew Spitfire...I think you always question a failure...thats how you learn...thanks Sudhir...thanks my friend JM...I do know and I do take comfort in the sharing...you know what the real challenge was, and I think thats the one I get the medal for...and I still say reality is what you make it LOL |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I liked it very much!!!!!! |
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