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Still Frozen in its Dangling Charm
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Still Frozen in its Dangling Charm |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Still Frozen in its Dangling Charm I can hear a child in clamoring screech next door and listening her words play me to see this green grass where play should be rampant and yesterday’s children grew and leaped into burgeoning before I had a chance to savor for time does not wait for even this loving The nasturtium’s leafing prolific pad splays out in quenchless throng I can feel it growing with my eyes closed and delicate as a bubble atop her green umbrella wiggles a drop of rain still from yesterday’s downpour now colored by sun’s rainbows making a small soft sound as it moves as imperceptible as a drifting cloud’s sigh The cold cement holds me where I lie in bedded backyard bliss for listening and feeling the sun is glorious and soft and fills these winter creases like a lover’s soft breath until they are ripe and swollen When I drink this orange of gracious giving this juice of sweet and tang that speaks to me all the goodness of careless youthful glee that this small space encompasses then…I long to have found time still frozen in its dangling charm |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
martie... this is lovely..you paint the scenery with you words, very nice job, and memories take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply beautiful, Martie! Very lovey! Denise |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Janet Marie--Thank you for reading and for your sweet comments. Denise--thanks so much. You must have fixed you computer problem. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ This is so YOU ! 'atop her green umbrella wiggles a drop of rain still from yesterday’s downpour now colored by sun’s rainbows making a small soft sound as it moves as imperceptible as a drifting cloud’s sigh' And that, my dear, is a pleasure. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, your reply is so YOU...sweet...sweet! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow! This is exceptional, Martie. Wonderful imagery. Lovely poem. Michael |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Wonderful paint, wonderful words, wonderful poem. *L* |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
A beautiful poem! You can certainly paint a picture with words, and I love that. I especially love the last two lines. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael--a wow from such a great poet makes my day. Sy--your wonderfuls are wonderful Rosemary--thanks for being there with such a nice reply. |
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