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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
I look at you and see my eyes shadowed by a different self. I hear your voice, so like my own. You're smile's the truest wealth. My eyes, my voice, my smile, have lost their faith to countless crimes. To turn my gaze towards your faith remembers betrayals of distant times. My friend, with words of endless hope, an optimistic angel of truth. You have touched my soul, at least a bit, and have so rescued my captured youth. Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~CH~ The obvious love and deep understanding you share with this special person, was captured so elegantly in this piece. I really loved the part of the poem that reads "I hear your voice so like my own....your smile's the truthest wealth" Isn't it amazing that the human smile can touch the heart so! Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I look at you and see my eyes shadowed by a different self. I hear your voice, so like my own. You're smile's the truest wealth. wow, this is SO BEAUTIFUL...I FEEL the emotions expressed in this... excellent, as always(smile) take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Aimster, Thank you. Loving and trusting can be so hard at times. It takes this kind of love to break through. Janet Marie...So sweet of you!!! I am glad you liked it (And I am hoping it is not too "sad")  Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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