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And Don't Forget To Sign.....
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And Don't Forget To Sign..... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
And Don’t Forget To Sign…. I have one regret More love to give Yours I’ll never forget It continues to live Leaving wasn’t your choice Gone from earth I hear your voice Singing in rebirth Your with Him now, I know Mourning took long I see you in soft glow Playing an angel’s song We may live on different shores But drop me a line You need to write me more And don’t forget to sign…. Love Dad Marina Feb 25/2000 [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 02-25-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a BEAUTIFUL tribute...i was touched by this...take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Marina~ This is simply beautiful! Loved the style and the message..in a word...awesome! Keep up the great poetry writing! Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
BEAUTIFUL!!!!! Ditto Janet,This is a very touching tribute. Nice read Marina. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have such a soft and beautiful heart. James |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, Everytime I read it, it brings a longing for my dad too. This is one of my Favorites of yours. James |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice poem! Hope your staying warm on those cold Canada nights. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a wonderful, beautiful tribute, Marina! It touched my heart! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marina~ This is very lovely. Bless you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thank-you Everyone!! I have learned that you should always tell someone how you feel because tomarrow may never come.... I just hope that my Dad can see this so as too remind him how much he is missed. Marina |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is a lovely tribute to your dad...makes me remember my dad that I lost years ago... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Soooooo true! This is a lovely writing! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
devina and January Flowers: Thanks to both of you! Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 02-26-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Danny: I could never be warm enough. [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 02-26-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina. . . this is wonderful. . . I lost my father when I was 10. . .and I have always told those who have complained about their fathers or mothers that at least they have a parent to complain about. . . Thank you. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Grandma Jo Member
since 2000-01-02
Posts 51 |
I am sure your Dad can see this. And he will love what he sees. Lovely tribute! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven: Thank you very much and you are exactly right! Grandama Jo: Thank you. I am a firm believer that our souls continue too exsist beyond our physical bodies. Marina |
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