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Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 2000-02-25 02:06 PM

I seek in my tomorrows,
...memories of today,
To lose my pain and sorrow,
...and smell life's sweet bouquet.

I'll once again feel summer rain,
...fall from the skies above,
Hold you gently in my arms,
...and whisper words of love.

On the winds, a madrigal,
...brings forth the songs of spring,
In pathless woods, mine pleasure seek,
...the joys to me you bring.

I journey through the wall of tears,
...sunlit days of soothing clime,
I seek mirage of love gone by,
...I drift on river time.

Above high peaks of pristine glory,
...altars to the sky,
Down below the peaceful valley,
...nevermore to cry.

I walk amid high mountain's meadow,
...I hear your siren's call,
Breathe in the scent of fragrant pine,
...my heart you do enthrall.

Once upon a summer's eve,
...in moon's translucent beams,
Within the arms of welkin's night,
...I dance upon my dreams.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2000-02-25 02:09 PM

So lovely is this boquet of life you pick and place so perfectly into words. Super poem!

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

2 posted 2000-02-25 03:47 PM

Mike, such a delicate framework you've given this piece...the subtle power within the elemental references is inspiring, to say the very least. Each line reads as if written from within a fragrant mountain meadow, alive with the restful rhythm of the earth's dreaming breath. I could read this a million times over and love it all the more...I think it's the serenity of the dream, overshadowing the sorrow, that makes it so expressive, for me, at least. I don't mean to carry on so, but this seems to be just what I needed to read today. Thank you!
Claire

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-25 06:02 PM

Mike, this expression is exquisite!!!
lovely imagery and tender emotions...I love this one. very nice.
take care, janet marie

...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-02-25 06:42 PM

Oh, Mike, this is amazing! So very beautiful!

Denise

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

5 posted 2000-02-25 08:53 PM

Really appreciate the replies. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Danke....

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2000-02-25 09:25 PM

Lyrical and entrancing...enjoying this very
much!

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

7 posted 2000-02-26 01:19 AM

Beautiful, sweet, delicate, exquisite...I truly loved this. Exellent work!

*Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

8 posted 2000-02-26 02:34 AM

Lovely

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

9 posted 2000-02-26 03:36 AM

Exceptionally graceful, delicate poem. Beauty flows all throughout this piece, Mike.
A definate two thumbs up!

Michael

paulsm
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 48

10 posted 2000-02-26 03:47 AM

I liked the way you put this together Mike, It touched me.

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

11 posted 2000-02-26 06:51 AM

Ah. You never fail to bring a smile to my face with your beautiful poetry.

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

12 posted 2000-02-26 10:21 AM

Exquisite ppem!
Very melodic and delicate
Liz

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2000-02-26 10:40 AM

WoW!!!!!!!What a lovely poem!!!!!!!!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2000-02-26 10:40 AM

Mike~
You have such a lovely way with thoughts.
This one is certainly no exception.
I like the gentleness of it.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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