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Through My Honesty
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Through My Honesty |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Through My Honesty The walls are crashing I can't see around them. There's darkness everywhere my soul is slipping away. I can't find reason through my honesty. I've held those walls I've walked around them. I used to hide the darkness peace was in my soul everything had a reason through my honesty. Why am I standing alone feeling sorry for myself? I'm the one who tries to support I'm the one who tries to shine brightness I'm the one who writes of peacefulness I'm the one now who doesn't want to face the truth through my honesty. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 02-25-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sometimes it's harder to convince ourselves of the truth than it is to convince others  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Everything is for a reason, though we may not always see it at the time, Gloria. This is abeautiful work - I can relate to these feelings well. Michael |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent poem. Sometimes it's best to just accept and not seek the reason... |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank You all, I wrote this one in about 5 minutes and it was a good release of anger, I felt such rage as I wrote it, but when I finished I was calmer. I actually went on to write a spiritual one after, so it moved me to another level that I needed to reach at the time. Thanks again, I'm glad it came out well for the time I did not put into it. |
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