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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Tender is the storm- That heals a wounded soul, Painstaking is the task- That makes a person whole. Courageous is the heart- That fights the sleeting rain, To find that wounded soul- And take away the pain. Patient is the hand- That soothes a worried brow, Forgives of past mistakes- Teaches only here and now. Trust is the key- To strong internal mending, Tenderly Courageous, Patiently Trusting- Unwavering, Unbending. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
oh devina this is beautiful, and I so needed to read this...gonna print it and put it up beside me....thank you my friend  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Devina. . . I've always thought that you could read my mind. . . this is just what I needed today. . . I really do love the way that you write. . .I know that it comes from the heart. . . Thank you my friend. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Lovely and tender words once again, devina. Your work bespeaks a tranquil, crystal-clear soul. Always leaves me feeling peaceful. Surely you ARE a healer. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Corozon- I'm so glad this made you feel better...I'm wondering when my better time will come!!! Hope all is well with you on the homefront sweetie!!! Sven-There's no better place than from the heart m'friend...glad you liked!!! serenity-It must be the sun shining here in Cali that brings upon such peace...glad to make your day!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Devina I'm glad you are healing and I'm glad you are writing beautiful poetry like this. James |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, Devina, this is lovely! My favorite of all the work I've read of yours, so far! Beautiful, tenderly written, and so true! I'm going to keep this one in my personal files, to enjoy forever. Thank you! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Devina, this is SO excellent..a perfect expression of loves dedication...poetic perfection. take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful words here, especialy liked the last. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Devina, This is sensational! I had a wonderful day here in North Carolina today, and this only made it that much better. Dear friend, thank you for sharing. You truly do have a gift! Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is fabulous, Devina! Very well done!! Denise |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Devina, this poem is inspiring, beautiful and perfect. Thank you for writing this, maybe it's time I try to heal. I printed your poem out, so when I have bad days all I have to do is read it to lift me up. You have a great talent. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ I just love this. The format is perfect. The content is awesome. The flow works. Gosh, I think I love it more than I thought I did. Your 'better' is coming, hon. I promise. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wonderful thoughts, Devina. You are very talented indeed. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I'm glad I've influenced so many people with this one...my deepest thanks!!! And Marge...if you see that one- send him my way, will ya??? Thanks hun!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Pure Magic in your words, devina. How blessed one would be to have such healing in their life. The last two lines spoke loudly for me. Beautiful. Michael |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
This is so creative and well done. Very touching for me!!!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Absolutely lovely! Each word, each verse... good job. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I ditto you there Michael...had to cheer myself up somehow...this seemed to do it!! Sharon, christie...thank you both dearly!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Devina, so tender is the storm, indeed, that helps one to heal in the way you've expressed with this piece. Wonderful work. Claire |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Sorry, am I late Oh what a poem you done Excusite and yes do full of wisdom It puts mine in a shadow for sure Beautiful The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is devine You've created quite a masterpiece with this one...well done |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutley Beautiful Devina!!!!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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