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The Choice of Love
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The Choice of Love |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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 The Choice of Love By: Amy M. Kennedy If given the choice, between love and money, I'd pick love every time For love is free, carries no pricetag, you can't buy it...no matter if you saved every dime Love is what beats in every mans heart, its what makes us feel free Family and friends, that's what its about, at least thats how it should be But greed takes over the mind, and pretty soon were in too deep Once you've chosen money, fame, and fortune over love and friends, its too late to weep Love of a family, a sibling, your best friend, whoever that special someone may be Tell them today that you love them, make them really see Don't let the unimportant things in life like money, tempt you into another route For it is these very things, that spread the seed of doubt We were brought to this earth with nothing in our hand Just made out of the very Earth, of clay and dirt and sand We leave this earth with nothing of materialitic value However the ones who have love in thier hearts...go to the kingdom of power < !signature--> ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 02-25-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent!! I love this poem. . . I love the words, I love the form. . . I just love everything about it!! You have indeed said it all my friend. . . love is the important thing. . .love stays. . .things do not. . . Thank you. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Sven Thank you so much for your kind words! Glad you liked this poem. And you are so right about love...it stays when everything else goes. Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
amy this is perfect...the last line says ti all...poetic wisdom...I agree with your lesson here...guess thats why I'm always broke  take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Janet Marie Why what a wonderful thing to say! Thank you so much. I truly am awestruck by your work! Its a pleasure and a great challenge to be working along the side of poets such as yourself here at Passions. ALL of you are truly wonderful! ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is excellent, Amy!! It reminds me of a poem that I wrote about someone who did choose money over family...perhaps I will post it tomorrow night or Sunday (I'm going away overnight and tomorrow). This one really spoke to me! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ Nicely said. Much truth here. I'll take love over money any day of the week. ~*MArge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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