Open Poetry #6 |
My spoken words |
Compgirl Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 85USA |
I do not mean to give you presure of any kind to burden your heart with the thoughts of mine. To question your committments with our savior to give you grief with my behavior. I wanted true love before my time was through to feel that soft touch I see in you. Experience the love I feel from your words just that one moment to feel safe and secure. I longed for the laughs and the warm smile your hand in mine as we walked the mile. Hearing the words "I love you" as they were meant to be said understanding the emotions that run through my head. Love is a terrifying trial we all run, we all hide through denial. I wont hurt you or cause you tears only make you smile, feel alive, to face your fears. Trust in me as your friend I don't give false statements or try to pretend. When you see me just show me that smile through your eyes love shows with what your heart has compiled. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
I really liked this, its very powerful and also very good |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Compgirl~ this is really very sweet and genlte. I liked it a lot. -SEA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I liked this... well done! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Nicely said.. HUGS |
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