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In Too Deep |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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~Marge Tindal~ Sometimes late at night, as I lay down to slumber into my mind you come, my thoughts start to wander. I smile with easy-remembering at some romantic thing you said. I turn, I toss, I snuggle deeper in my bed. I close my eyes and try counting sheep. But, sleep won't come I'm in too deep. Deeply and totally in love with you. It makes no sense to me, as to why I'm here awake, instead of in your arms where I should be. Your memories surround me, like a blanket of sweet caress. I pull the memories close trying once more to sleep. But ... sleep won't come. I'm in too deep. < !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 02-23-2000).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I have been there! Great poem!!  -SEA |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Whoa, I think many will relate to this one! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
When I'm on the computer half the night ... could this be the reason my wife taps me on the shoulder once an hour ? and tells me what time it is  maybe she loves meRex}<{{{{o> I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nicely done!!!!!! |
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PREACH Junior Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 20 |
WhtDove said it right, just about everyone has been in this situation. nice job. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice Miss Marge! D |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, after reading this, I feel for some reason like I know you a little better....and I like what I see. Wonderful writing. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A very descriptive and wonderful poem. *L* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How do you do it? You always seem to say what I'm only TRYING to say...hat's off to the pro. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You do have a way with words!! Beautiful, Marge! Denise |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, I hear this poem like a song, especially the repition of I'm in too deep. It is a wonderful poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very creative Marge and very lovely. A joy to read. James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very nice Marge...I think almost everyone has had a touch of that "Bug" Marina |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Beautiful! Ah, yes, I can relate. Hmmm. No sleep to be found... |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Oh can I relate! A most excellent poem. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Marge(y) - this is great and quite the heart thumper! Nope - sheep never work, my friend, try the alphabet! (Backwards too - to make it interesting...hehe) K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Thanks, gal. WhiteDove~ Glad you liked. Rex~ Yeah ! Could be ... VanDana~ Thanks, hon. Preach~ Thank you for the read. Danny~ Balladeer~ And you know me better than most.  Seymour~ Thank you, my friend. Serenity~ You tickle me ! I appreciate you. Denise~ Oh, just my heart blabbing again. Martie~ Kinda figured you'd like. James~ Thanks, love. Marina~ Thank you. Glad you enjoyed. Rosemary~ I KNEW you'd enjoy and relate. You know, you aren't here often enough ! Gemini~ Thanks. Kamla~ Lord, honey .. If I tried tip-toeing through the alphabet ... I'd have to get up and write about 26 new poems ! ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is simply beautiful, your a woman with wonderful talent that makes our eyes scream for more. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
great poem, you captured it perfectly |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Can I just add an AMEN? *G* This is great, Marge!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ What a very nice thing for you to say. Thank you. Corazon~ Thank you. Suthern~ You CAN and you DID ! And I thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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