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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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-last new first full- What makes rock glow? You can tell me it's The hidden sun's light, fine. But what makes gray Seem white? Our gravitational pull, Equitable tearing apart, Keeps the moon's first face on us. What grows on its others? Are there eyes? Why is suspended rock And starburning gas Such a romantic sight? Are we celebrating the lives Of things which never lived? Floating above us, They don't care when we die. The tide is high. Does that fill your urge to lie? Such a pull, such a dark Watery pull. Oh, my dark, watery pool; What we can hide. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
bsquirrel~ you can hide nothing from the moon. It reflects your heart, you can hide nothing from your heart. I really liked this!  -SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
appeals to the witch in me... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sea, If you can't hide anything from your heart, why do so many people have heart attacks? I know, I know; shut up, blacksquirrel.Serenity, As long as it appeealed to you in SOME way. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
last new first full- What makes rock glow? You can tell me it's The hidden sun's light, fine. But what makes gray Seem white? ------------ Why is suspended rock And starburning gas Such a romantic sight? Are we celebrating the lives Of things which never lived? Floating above us, They don't care when we die. -------------- Oh, my dark, watery pool; What we can hide. ---------------- went forum stalking...found this gem sparlking in the past... some things are even better the second time around...  this was perfect. jm |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
actually i said that wrong... i meant to say... somethings are so good...they deserve a second look...(smile) back to the top my flying squirrel poet jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Holy crap, JM. Where did THIS come from? I felt a slight jolt seeing this thing here again. Wow, it's been a while. Now, let's watch it die properly and without reservation. Mike |
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