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| Open Poetry #6 |
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Loose love |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Dreamy unapproachable mountians overwhelmed your desire Deadly heights reign in your love Butterflies dance to fragrant silky romances in the night You gracfully fly in torment of the oozing love I am in heaven taking the halo of pain Moving slow twards you smiling..... |
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patchoulipumpkin Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 196Bermuda |
Hey Nikki, try posting this in Open Poetry or critical analysis, where you will get more comments on it. This is usually set aside just for prose, so people might not comment on it, and raise discussion that is raised in the poetry posts. Good luck with your poem. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Patch is right, so on it goes to Open #6! |
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