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Open Poetry #6

I'm blue

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-02-22 11:14 AM

Iam blue,
There is noone to talk to me,
But I don't mind,
I feel they don't need me,
I'm blue and I'm sad,
I need someone to talk to me,
I feel there's something wrong with me,
But I know it's not true,
Cause I look fine,
And I can do things if I cry,
cause I know there's nothing,
wrong with me,
I'll hold my head high,
And say I can do it,
there's nothing wrong with me,
let people say what they want,
I'm lonely and I'm blue

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

1 posted 2000-02-22 11:40 AM

You've expressed so well how it is to be sad and feeling alone...do keep writing!

Claire

January Flowers
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 209
South Carolina

2 posted 2000-02-22 11:57 AM

Have you heard that song, "blue"?
Just curious...it drives me crazy,
seems to be full of nonsense,
but catchy all the same, this tune.
Very desolate poem here, Vandana.
I hope you find some cheer within
that will have you writing in more
colors than one really soon!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-02-23 02:13 AM

Now little Ms. VanDana

Blue is a lovely color
when you wear it,
not when you bear it.

Love is the pink
of the blush
on the cheeks
with a heart-felt flush.

Green is the shade
of a new friend made.
Hello FRIEND

I hope your heart
finds a RAINBOW again.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2000-02-23 02:38 AM

Vandana soo sad

but cheer up we're talking to you

Marge as usual you put a smile on everyone's face great reply I loved it. HUGS to Vandana and a

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