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We wouldn't dare
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We wouldn't dare |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
A time for me to understand to find my place alone. I wash away my tears at last breaking through this mask. I seek to find my other half but I'm not whole myself, I'll work to reach my happiness through stresses, and lonliness. Maybe one day I'll be whole again, happy by myself. And when I am, I hope we share the love we wouldn't dare. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
tulip, this is a very sweet emotional poem...well expressed in a few words ...the last line is a perfect ending. take care, janet marie I love you Is all that you can't say- Years gone by and still... Words don't come easily Like I love you, I love you... But you can say baby... Baby can I hold you tonight Maybe if I told you the right words At the right time you'd be mine... Tracy Chapman |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Tulip this is nice. Working to reach your happiness. James |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Very true message and a great poem...    |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Simple writing that shares so much. Chin up, so you will look in the right direction!  |
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