Open Poetry #6 |
Poets Without Words |
Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What would our world be like today If poets words were taken away? The painted images we would not see Of pictures past or yet to be. Into the wind our words would go. And hence no one would ever know Of the heartache and anguish we harbor within. Or the passion and beauty that flows through our pen. Each others hearts we could not touch. Nor share our thoughts we crave so much. This world made up of sight and sound Would be missing something quite profound. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ You just said a mouth full ! I think of all the poets from the past that I've read ... and so thankful I am that they cared enough to pen their thoughts for us. With all the talent abounding within these walls ... we will be remembered. This is just wonderful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
what a beautiful poem...I love this one... perfectly expressed.very nice... a poets words...our wisdom to gain take care, janet marie I love you Is all that you can't say- Years gone by and still... Words don't come easily Like I love you, I love you... But you can say baby... Baby can I hold you tonight Maybe if I told you the right words At the right time you'd be mine... Tracy Chapman |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
words written, said and done some with sadness some in fun poets words all written in pen for all to see now and then Thanks for your post tracie |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
I enjoyed your poem very much. It said a lot with a few words. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is wonderful, Eloise! A poet without words is a very sad person. Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Eloise, thank you for the gifting of this wise and prolific verse! A poet without words would be as tragic as an artist without a canvas, a shoe without a sole, a moon without its man...lol...sorry, got carried away, but indeed, the words of the poet are the very breath of one's spirit. Loved this poem! Claire |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you all so much for your wonderful responses. I know I would be completely lost without my pen and words. |
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PREACH Junior Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 20 |
AFTER READING THIS I FEEL SO OUT OF PLACE, LIKE MY WORDS DON'T REALLY GET THE POINT ACROSS LIKE THEY SHOULD. MAYBE I GOT THE WORDS THAT WERE MENT FOR A POET WHO LOST THIERS AND THAT IS A BAD FEELING BUT ON A LIGHTER NOTE GREAT POEM PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE. PEACE PREACH 4 EVER |
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