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Balladeer's got it wrong!
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Balladeer's got it wrong! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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'Deer O dear our Balladeer he thinks I'm from Australia! I sniff I cry and wonder why? and well, I just flumph in sad despair yet what could I expect though, really from one who lurks about in woods and gardens with naught but a hat and a Vienna sausage to keep the sunlight out… O dear old 'deer you're without compare in confusing my sweet place of origin So here I shout NEW ZEALAND! I shout it loud and hope he hears (I also add I said I would three times is all it took and give a smirking smile) ~~ Ok guys - so comic writing has never been my forte  ~~'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I heard those New Zealand girls were known for their sense of humor. You are so cute Kamla. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kamla~ Balladeer will have great folly with this. As we know, he's quite the 'dear/deer'. Wonderful spoof ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Looks like our friend Balladeer Goofed a goof big time, I fear She'll let you know it, by and by At least you didn't call her a guy Let's get it right, as she expects Her nationality and her sex She whips a retort with no dilly dally You in a poem, me in the Alley Sorry Kamla, for our goofs Liz |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Aw, gee, Severn! I thought they were both about the same, like Ireland and Scotland.Well, I promise I will always think of you with ZEAL!!! (I will now put my dunce cap back on and retreat to the corner  ) |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
LOL@ Severn and Balladeer |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Kamla, hehehe this is great, YOU TELL HIM HUN!!! hehe. Fancy confusing Australia with New Zealand.  Enjoyed the read Kamla, and oh Balladeer you too! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey severn I loved this it was great...from the girl from Oz..There's no confusing us is there. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This was great severn, From Aussie here I dont know how they confuse our origins |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Kamla, Your the greatest in my book. *L* Sy By the way that was a good piece of work. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Brought a laugh to me with this poem this morning I love light hearted poetry Rex}<{{{{o> |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Oh me, Oh my, lil Severn lass Your sex and locale slipped right past This weary sailor of low repute. I didn't know very much of you. You say you are an island gal Are you also an aboriginale? When winter strikes you in July, I'm roasting on the other side. The internet is a wond'rous place Where we can meet "face-to-face." And for this blessing I say, "Great!" (Don't worry, Kamla, I'll not call you "Mate.") |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
I can't believe I just heard that ..lol Did he say "like Ireland and Scotland" ???!!!!!! Whew .. you obviously like living dangerously Mr Deer, and K .. you were too soft on him  P |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Got get 'em, Kam! p.s. Balladder, them's fightin' words in some parts of the world! Put 'em up, put 'em up! Corinne |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Guess you told him Severn ... hehehe Brought smiles ... Too Cute |
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