Open Poetry #6 |
Of your own works |
Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Of your own works Neither art nor nature can enhance you more you are the beauty that I live for Neither science nor poetry can discern your deepest side you are the most cunning stride Your gentle true touch is one made of certain love You are what paradise is made of I feel such passion with you such enlightment and liberty You are my life and destiny You are of your own works You are my strong and beautiful lover and I will never know a better |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~poe THIS is a true work of art...i hope this person u write of knows how important they are to you. nice poem! Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Welcome to Passions I enjoyed this piece, not only for its content and theme, but for its rhythm...a beautiful sounding poem, rich and resonant when read aloud. As for its theme, what finer devotion could be offered? |
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