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| Open Poetry #6 |
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In Her Eyes |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
She seemed so bright amidst the dark That the stars burned with envy The sky opened up to swallow her whole And the clouds fell to the sea I was pretending that the sun still shone And illuminated the bluest of skies Until one day I looked up unawares And beheld those same knowing eyes Transfixed, she held me for a time That seemed to last forever With the sweetest of smiles, Her eyes seemed to say, “Never" |
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mystery Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 79 |
As I was reading your poem, I thought of myself! THE EYES NEVER LIE, Keep up the good work |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this poem is perfect!! so full of imagery and well expressed emotions...it has a mystic quality about it, that i liked. great work.. take care, janet marie I love you Is all that you can't say- Years gone by and still... Words don't come easily Like I love you, I love you... But you can say baby... Baby can I hold you tonight Maybe if I told you the right words At the right time you'd be mine... Tracy Chapman |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Why thank you Janet. Mystic indeed was that night i write about. A sad story. |
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